Thanks to everyone who commented on this song for their comments.

I got back my NSAI evaluation today. I like NSAI evaluations and put a lot of credibility in them. The suggestions were to reduce the number of lines in both the verses and the choruses and increase the impact of the bridge.

I like the song well enough to put the time in on it to see where that goes. At the end of trying, if I don't like it...it provides another version of one my obscure songs. :-)

Will post up the revision... if I ever finish it. :-)

Thanks again,
Martin