PeekaBOO again....

Just thinking a bit more about that line. You do sort of mix up 2nd and 3rd person in that section...so what about something like?:

When you're forced to consider
Who are you YOU ARE
What's a child to do INNOCENT SO FAR
When you face that mirror
Looking back at you
His eyes fierce and blue


Not as subtle as the rest of the lyric, but thought I'd toss it out there anyway.

Anyhoo, glad you're digging my sequins wink . And hope to stick around for a while too!

Ciao for now,
Beth


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