That is great, Kurt. You show us rather than tell us and it feels as if you were really there, even if it's fictional. The music and recording quality is top notch as are your vocals.

If I had to suggest any changes, I would say modernize it to something more recent than Charlie and his friends. There are a lot of people around who do not know who Charlie is.


Colin

I try to critique as if you mean business.....

http://colinwardmusic.com/

http://rosewoodcreekband.com/