Hi Iggy, I wondered where you got to.

Overall this is a keeper. It's got attitude. Just one small sugg. Maybe the chorus needs to start with a different chord to make it jump forward more.
Might be worth a try.

Vic


It's never too late? Yes it is, so do it now.

If, given time, a monkey can write the complete works of Shakespeare maybe there's hope for me.

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