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Leafs
by Gary E. Andrews - 05/01/24 01:05 PM
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I enjoyed this. I think you've gotten some good feedback on the production re: the verb. You have a nice voice. Like Tom, I was wondering where home was and I think a bridge might serve to break this up a bit and solidify the narrative.
Just a thought. Wendy, I don't believe every song needs a bridge, but that's just my opinion. I also think the 'narrative' is solid as it is, but once again, JMO.  Regards, Bob
Last edited by 90 dB; 09/14/19 06:53 PM.
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