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Mutlu
by Gary E. Andrews - 04/15/24 07:08 PM
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Joined: Apr 2002
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Very good start Neil! I wondered what it would sound like in first person. (I thought the second line might make a good first)
Barflies raised their glasses shouted cheers When I came to the bar in search of beers Billy asked how I was keepin' I said not well my wife is leavin
I'm not crying in my beer I just turn the other cheek I'm not crying in my beer Tears make it too damn weak I'm not crying in my beer You can't fix a heart with grief
Optional last lines: (Though I know how it may seem) (Is that so hard to believe?) (Not my style-that ain't me)
Or as your observer:
Barflies raised their glasses shouted cheers When Bill came to the bar in search of beers I asked Billy how the hell ya keepin' He said not well cause my wife is leavin
He's not crying in his beer He just turns the other cheek He's not crying in his beer Tears make it too damn weak He's not crying in his beer You can't fix a heart with grief
Optional last lines: (Is that so hard to believe?) (Though I know how it may seem) (Sometimes looks...they can deceive)
Best of luck! -Mike
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