Originally Posted by Ricki E. Bellos
Nice to meet you, Paul and welcome to JPF. This is about as cheezy as it gets! grin I think you've hit on all the popular types and so cleverly too, I've got nothing to add. Well done!

Ricki


Thanks for the warm welcome Ricki - nice to e-meet you too! Glad you found it cheesy. (never thought I'd say that smile )


Originally Posted by Kristi McKeever
Hi Paul,

These are cleverly written lyrics that go to very cheesy depths! smile Those near rhymes are so creatively conceived: “cheese shop/eavesdrop, cheesy song/Parmesan Mozzarella/fella...and the list goes on. Very enjoyable! Good production too.

I really enjoyed the whimsy of it all!

Kristi


Thanks Kristi - nice to hear that from an obviously accomplished lyricist smile

And thanks again for anyone that took the time to listen smile

Paul