I love this song. The production is also great, except I found the far right and left panning of the vocals a bit distracting. Through my headphones, it was less of a stereo effect than the sound of two distinct voices standing a long way apart from each other at different sides of the room, which didn't seem very natural. It was less noticeable when the strings came in because of the fuller sound. I loved that moment when the strings came in by the way.

If it was me (which it wouldn't be because I doubt if I could write such a great song), I'd experiment with bringing those voices closer together and maybe using the effect more strongly in the chorus than in the verses to apply extra lift. I probably shouldn't be giving production advice though smile

Lyrically, I think it's great. If you're still open to lyric suggestions at this stage in the process, I think "unclipped wings" might be better than "untamed wings."

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