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I like the idea, Ross.
Maybe you could push home the simple lyric by making it simpler and repeating certain words.
E.G.
I am the child of two broken hearts,
Two drifting worlds, that drifted apart.
Two separate loves on two separate isles,
tears at the heart of this only child.
Same for the chorus to accentuate the title.
E.G.
Like THREE ...LOST ...DOVES ... flying around
LOOKING DOWN ... on unfamiliar ground
WE ... WERE ,,, ONE ... joined in love
NOW ... A ... LONE ... like THREE ... LOST ... DOVES
Vic
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