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Leafs
by Gary E. Andrews - 05/01/24 01:05 PM
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Hi Tyler,
This is really good, I can sing it all the way through without any problem, and I love the memories it portrays.
You could probably put in better song format and number the verses, I really like that chorus.
In the first verse, I would delete (Midday) and in the second verse, the line that says (in back) the word IN is not needed, other then that, this is good writing. Good luck with it.
Emmy
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