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here's a new one from this morning.

http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=13483477

Blue Nights Blue Days

i look around,in the room,at our memories all in bloom
everywhere there's something that reminds me of you
time heals,that's what i've heard,but your goodbye is an echoing word
it breaks the silence,it cuts right through

blue nights blue days,every one of them coming my way
since you've gone away,gone away
blue nights blue days,every one of them coming in play
since you've gone away,gone to stay

i tell myself,i'll get by,soon as i stop these tears i cry
let it rain let it rain,see if i care
i sit alone,in the dark,can't pull a smile from a broken heart
i call your name but you're not there

[chorus]

all my friends,they mean well,but they don't know this living hell
their lives are shining in the sun
they don't know,how it feels,how a heartbreak couldn't be more real
when your love has come undone

[chorus]


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Hi Mike,

Good beat/catchy tune.

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Alright Calvin,thanx! Mike

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I remember a Buddy Holly song called Blue Days,Black Nights.I like this one aw well Mike.Best of luck with it.
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hey Travis,thanks for the visit and kind words.Can't say that i've heard that Buddy Holly song but i'll youtube her. Mike

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Mike,

I like the groove ....Enjoyed the listen! Is that you playing the guitar?...Nice Sax...!

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thanks IggyIggy! No sir,i can't play guitar,it's BIAB. Mike

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Professionally done, Michael. Time heals for sure, but it takes its time.

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Nice relaxed delivery, and like the guitar playing (even if it not you playing !) and the sax adds some "soul" to the mix.

Nice job,

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thanks a lot for your time Jim!Mike

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Hey there Mike. Nice jazzy feel. Isn't BIAB something else? I am upgrading to the 2016 version for Christmas.

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thanks a bunch Kevin! Mike

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hey Douglas,thanks for dropping by,i appreciate your visit.If i only took the time out to figure it all out Douglas,i'm sure i could do better.The 2016 version should have some really new cool play things on it.Good luck with it! Mike

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Hi Mike.
You're getting better at it.
If I had a sugg to make I'd probably sugg that you change the melody in the chorus so it's a lot different to the verse.

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hey Vic,thanks for the listen and comment!I was aware of that but after about 10 minutes of trying to figure something else out,which i was getting way off base,i found my way back to this.It is harder than you think when you're not a musician.Good to hear from ya! Mike

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Wow. This Band in a Box is sure an amazing thing. I really like how you pulled this together. I'm pretty sure I would just pull my hair out if I even tried something like this. The sax was really cool & unexpected. Loved that. The end was kind of unexpected too. Overall, a pretty nice tune.


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hey Wendy,thanks for stoppin' by,i appreciate it.Well i pulled out half of my hair trying to learn this biab thingy.Not getting too deep in it but enough to put something a little close to what i would do with a live band i guess. Mike

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I enjoyed my listen, Mike. I agree with Vic though, about the chorus melody. You wouldn't neccesarily have to change the music, just your vocal. Take it where you would if you were singing harmony with yourself, a couple of steps up at least part of the time. It will give the song a little break and add more dynamics to it. Just a thought. I like the addition of the sax as well, gives it even more soulfulness.

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Seriously?? This was all done with Band In A Box?? Great song!

Nice lyric. "I sit alone in the dark... can't pull a smile from a broken heart." That's great!

I too wished that the chorus was more different than the chorus. But some songs are just like that.

Great job.

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I love sad songs - nice job --Pete

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thank ya Ricki!I'll try and get back to it but ya know me.But it's great to get everyone's ideas as i do take them seriously and maybe,just maybe,i'll rework a song one day.Mike

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thanks John,yep,BIAB.I appreciate your visit and thoughts.Mike

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I like it Michael! And yes we do love sad songs.
I loved the line "i sit alone,in the dark,can't pull a smile from a broken heart". Great stuff!
I have Band in a Box 2014 but I get too jammed up trying to get the right sound and lose the muse. Looks like you figured it out.
No criticism, except maybe a bridge? But it works great just the way it is and you're already over 4 minutes. Maybe increase the tempo a tad, to get the time down a bit and add movement.
Cheers! Great Job smile

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thank ya Pete!Mike

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thanks for droppin' in on this one Paul.Yeah,i'm still learning my biab,sometimes i get lucky with the outcome.Ya know,i always forget about a bridge or not sure when to use one.I appreciate your ideas!Mike


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