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Here is a skirmish theme (write/record song in an hour) proposed by out own DonnaMarilyn. She said to write a song using these words: "UNDECIDED – RAIN – LOST - ALIBI" Here's what I came up with. It is pretty goofy, but it is just an hour!
on the train (c) emmrich 2017
I’m undecided standing in the rain I lost my alibi when I saw you on the train
I might have been misguided weak link in the chain my plans went awry on the way to ft wayne
like a crime novel without the sexy model more mid-western plump kept coming up
so I pulled down my cap wish I had a bogie hat and got off that train should have gone by plane
so I’m undecided no umbrella, lots of rain I lost my alibi my treks in vain
I always enjoy your uke/vocals, Kevin. You have your own unique enjoyable style. That said, I also think you could put a little more effort into the lyrics, but I know from the past, you write, record, then move on, so all I'll say is, if you spent more thought and time, you'd have an even better song.