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https://www.soundclick.com/html5/v4/player.cfm?songID=13892920In Awe [04/09/01] [A] the cry of a loon, a new rising moon starlight reflects on the lake. later the mist steals in for a kiss disappears quick as a snake. [B] here 'neath Gods veil we are humbled. spellbound, brought to our knees. fear when my time comes I'll stumble. in awe of the things, I will see. [A] the air gets chilled, I'm asked to rebuild the fire for warmth and for light. We gaze towards the sky, catch a comet flash by dream for no end to this night. Instrumental / [B] [A] the moon settles down, the sun comes around the fire's now asleep like the stars. We lay close to the coals, feel close to my soul and content in coming this far. Copyright © 2019 by Douglas Murphy
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Very moody, I can easily imagine this as a movie track
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Well written. Good structure. I think it needs more contrast in the melody between the sections. In the last chorus, we feel a beginning of contrast...
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