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by Gary E. Andrews - 04/15/24 07:08 PM
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It's three o'clock in the morning. Don't judge me. LOL
"Oh, Poison Ivy" Copyright September 6, 2019 by Gary E. Andrews
Oh, Poison Ivy, Girl what have you done to me? You've poisoned everything I hear and see! I used to sit by the ocean, watch the girls ride by on their bikes. You've made me hate a song, that everybody likes!
Oh, Poison Ivy, You've made life a living hell! You give the air I breathe a funny smell! I used to love all your music! You seemed to do everything right! You've made me hate a song, that everybody likes!
I hear it on the radio! I wanna hit the switch! You get under my skin! You used to scratch my itch! You've made me hate a song, that everybody likes.
Oh, Poison Ivy, Girl what are we gonna do? I still get such an urge for touching you! I used to struggle with it all! Now I feel like I've lost the fight! You've made me hate a song, that everybody likes!
I hear it on the radio! I wanna hit the switch! You get under my skin! You used to scratch my itch! You've made me hate a song, that everybody likes.
There will always be another song to be written. Someone will write it. Why not you? www.garyeandrews.com
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Fine writing.
Last edited by Guy E. Trepanier; 09/06/19 08:02 AM.
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If you could work a reference to "The Coasters" into this...... Hmmmmm........ ?
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Hi, I agree it's a good write, I also agree with JAPOV, I kept trying to remember the song I also think (watch girls ride by on their bikes) sounds kinda pervy, I think (where girls rode by on their bikes) all the best.john
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I like girls John. If what you do or think when you watch girls ride by on their bikes is perverse then you probably shouldn't do it. When I do it it's okay! I'm doing and thinking everything I'm supposed to in a civilized world! LOL And the girls like me! Sometimes they give me a ride home. I pedal. They sit on the handlebars. Sure, we end up at my house sometimes. But whether they come in is up to them. Whether they ever leave...well...that's why all the neighbors say, "He was a quiet man. Kept to himself. Went to the beach and watched the girls ride by on their bikes a lot. Seemed to accumulate a lot of bikes. Girl's bikes." And the Line about Poison Ivy; just because it's been used before doesn't mean it can't be used again. People get hung up on things like that. If your Song titled "Stairway To Heaven" or "Hotel California" is nothing like theirs and has merit then go with it!
There will always be another song to be written. Someone will write it. Why not you? www.garyeandrews.com
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I was actually serious Gary lol. Think about it... "Hate a song that everybody likes"
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