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#1156994 - 09/26/19 11:06 PM Dance With Me  
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You can love him all you want
Just dance with me
You don't have to say a word
Just dance with me
Let me hold you in my arms
In the dim lights and soft sound
You can think of him and his charms
As we slowly spin around
Just dance with me

You can carry his last name
Just dance with me
I'll bear you no shame
Just dance with me
Let my dreams come true tonight
Like so many times before
Those memories i hold tight
Won't you say yes just once more
And dance with me

We came here so many times,and danced the night away
Years ago when you were mine,now it seems like yesterday
But i know better than to get off this stool,and ask you for this dance
I could have danced with you forever,but like a fool,i threw away the chance
Come dance

#1157005 - 09/27/19 12:10 PM Re: Dance With Me [Re: Michael LeBlanc]  
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This looks nice, Michael.

Vic


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#1157028 - 09/27/19 08:15 PM Re: Dance With Me [Re: Michael LeBlanc]  
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Hey Vic,thanks for your time.I hope all is well. Mike

#1157030 - 09/27/19 08:25 PM Re: Dance With Me [Re: Michael LeBlanc]  
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Hi Mike,

I love the built in "release" your bridge has here. The higher syllable count and more note saturated bridge is perfectly creating a release from the pent up feelings accumilating in the verses. Great work!

Good to hear from you. smile

Last edited by Michael Zaneski; 09/27/19 08:27 PM.

Fate doesn't hang on a wrong or right choice
Fortune depends on the tone of your voice

-The Divine Comedy (Neil Hannon)
from the song "Songs of Love"
from the album "Casanova" (1996)
#1157060 - 09/28/19 06:50 PM Re: Dance With Me [Re: Michael LeBlanc]  
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hey Mike,i appreciate your time and thoughts on this one.Mike

#1158288 - 10/28/19 10:16 AM Re: Dance With Me [Re: Michael LeBlanc]  
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Well done Michael. I like it and it flows well.

#1158576 - 11/12/19 01:30 AM Re: Dance With Me [Re: Michael LeBlanc]  
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Long Time Mike but back at least for a minute or 2,
This flows well, and as a dancer I have a soft spot for songs with dance in them. just a couple of thoughts:
Years ago when you were mine, it seems like yesterday
But i (wont) get (up off) this stool,and ask you for this dance
(We) could have danced forever,but i threw away the chance
Come dance
(Oh please)
Come Dance


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