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https://soundcloud.com/artwhimsically-yours/loves-resolutions-from-ingvars-song-accousticLove’s Resolutions. <3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3 It’s another early morning just past New Years Eve all the partying is over now in the bitter cold of January (wind noise) but I do believe it’ll be a better year if we give back what we receive and never give each other reasons to be angry or to grieve I know last year was kind of rough for us love can sometimes cause a fuss but I’ve made some resolutions on some of what we both discussed I know I’ve taken you for granted but now I realize your worth and there were times you couldn’t stand it But now I’ll give what you deserve because the thought of this long year ahead spent without you is absurd I hope you will take what I have pledged and let our love find sweet rebirth. I promise I will never give you cause to feel neglected or alone cause I will love you, baby, without pause In actions not spoken but shown. You are the only beauty in my heart the rest is just for all those who have yet find their perfect counterpart like I have shared so much with you. And if I fail just whisper in my ear 9 simple words I need to hear “You promised this would be a better year?” and all my faults will disappear. I know that life might go on without you but without you, life will just go on and on cause I love everything about you my heart would shatter if you're gone I want to face each early morning in every new year yet come wrapped in your arms, always supporting your precious love…my only one. Incredible music by Ingvar Tautra -©-2020 Vocals and lyrics by-Matthew F. Blowers III-©-2020
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Daringly mushy! Lol...
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I appreciate the sincerity of the lyrics as well. The song gets to the point right away and the lyrics follow up on the promise of the introduction. Some really nice guitar work featured as well. If you're looking for ways to improve this, I wonder if the vocal production could be cleaned up a little on this track. The vocals sound a little boxy to my ears. There's also a slight dip in volume around 1:35 that sounds like it might be unintentional. All that said, great work! I enjoyed it!
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Japov- "Those who are brave enough to be daringly mushy, wind up with the crem brulee of love's finest. She loved it and I am the benefactor...LOL"
Adam of the Universe: You have written one of the most concise and friendly comments and i do Appreciate that so much. The sincerity is real and needed this ong stems from life's distractons wouding love. I would love to improve it, alas my guitarist lives in Norway and I am in Ohio, so we are left to my recording vocals and lyrics over his downloaded music on a tascam digital and then mixing it all into a somewhat presentable song. I can fix the volume, and go back in and lower the reverb as well. And I really am thankful for your critique.You will be on my list to check out and leave the same type of comment on your work later this evening when I get back from a gig.~~Matt
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Fortune certainly favors the brave my friend! I guess I just haven’t found the right consistency of mush yet lol.... Your "wind noise" was perfect BTW
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That's cause I am full of hot air.....put some sugar and honey in the mush you serve to lovely young ladies as well as some vodka and you will find the right consistency for sure...LOL
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