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#1160791 - 01/20/20 06:23 PM ::: OLD FASHION SONG (Uke) :::  
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Here is one of my songs.
Rough demo: My voice + ukulele

https://www.soundclick.com/music/songInfo.cfm?songID=13948932

OLD FASHION SONG
_______________________________________________
© Words and music: Guy E. Trépanier, 2019.
All rights reserved: Guy E. Trépanier.

If you like my songs, please donate:
https://www.paypal.me/guyetrep

Intro: 8 bars (key of A)

Come closer to me
My sweet little bee
Please, lend me your hand
I won't be too bland

So let me tell you
I'll take care of you
I promise I'll do
I'll do the best I can do

I wanna give you
This old fashion song
I wrote it for you
So come and sing along
This old fashion song

... ... ...

You got a true skill
To give me some thrill
You can take the time
To share a pastime

So let me tell you
I'll take care of you
I promise I'll do
I'll do the best I can do

I wanna give you
This old fashion song
I wrote it for you
So come and sing along
This old fashion song

... ... ...

Baby you drive me crazy
You're the one I'm thinking of
I wanna make you happy
I wanna show you my love

I wanna give you
This old fashion song
I wrote it for you
So come and sing along
This old fashion song

... ...
This old fashion song


Guy E. Trepanier #371
Melody: feb 2019. Lyrics: feb 2019.


K.I.S.S. Keep It Simple and Singable
Soundclick: Songs buy Guy E. Trepanier
#1160794 - 01/21/20 05:57 AM Re: ::: OLD FASHION SONG (Uke) ::: [Re: Guy E. Trepanier]  
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Hey Guy,

The song itself, and the lyrics itself work fine.

What is not working here ( as an island boy ) are the passion in the vocal and in the playing of the uke.

I could see this played around the kava table, and be very singable.

What falls down is ti's delivery. Give it some passion both in the playing and vocal delivery. wink

cheers, niteshift

#1160808 - 01/21/20 03:51 PM Re: ::: OLD FASHION SONG (Uke) ::: [Re: Guy E. Trepanier]  
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NITESHIFT!! Lol... You should probably think again... I'll bet our ol'boy Guy has the ladies lining up in Quebec smile

#1160810 - 01/21/20 05:39 PM Re: ::: OLD FASHION SONG (Uke) ::: [Re: Guy E. Trepanier]  
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I dont think the problem is passion, He reminds me of Don Ho, or even Dare I say Elvis? Love me Tender,,,,, its right in that pocket, obviously nobody can be Elvis.

Simple songs, I wouldnt think somebody would record it, but you actually sound good and probably the strongest part is your voice.

if it were me I would try to expand on some of your Ideas Guy. You have probably hundreds of songs in this style.

You can bring something new to it.

Last edited by Fdemetrio; 01/21/20 05:55 PM.

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