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Thanks to Mike for chorus idea
THIS FAR BEFORE V There were times when i needed a friend times i wondered when this pain would end Hearts that seemed like closed doors I'd been down, but not gone THIS FAR BEFORE C If got on my knees and prayed, Would you give me a sign that won't be talking to myself each time Something to believe in for evermore you see I'm so down, but never THIS FAR BEFORE
Music V Never a times when I've seen such anguish why do some have to suffer like this? Hungry, helpless from war after war sure this world hasn't gone THIS FAR BEFORE B It's never gone THIS FAR BEFORE for the weak, weary abused and the poor Lord it's never gone THIS FAR BEFORE. Music C
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Nice song Travis. Definitely different times.
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I wondered if you changed to the present time in the chorus? Ex: If I got on my knees and prayed Would I waste my time Would you give me a sign Something I could get up for Cause I've been down But never this far before
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Thanks CT Good idea Mike ill take that! Cheers John
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Thanks to Mike for suggestion regarding the chirus John
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