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#1166473 - 07/11/20 10:17 AM A part of me  
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A part of me
Intro
You left me with a broken heart but a part of you stayed behind.
I struggled with my conscience till I saw she had your eyes.
Chorus
A part of me still loves you for the love she gives to me.
A part of me still hates you for the daughter you won’t see.
but love you or hate you; you’re still a part of me.
Verse
Someday she’s going to call you up and ask you to explain
why you left her mom and her and you won’t know what to say.
She’ll look at you with your own eyes and hate you like I do.
She’ll say that if you’d stayed around she’d have loved you like I do.
Chorus
A part of me still loves you for the love she gives to me.
A part of me still hates you for the daughter you won’t see.
but love you or hate you you’ll still be a part of me.
Verse
Someday she’s going to want to know was I a hit and run.
Were you scared to be a dad or concerned for number one?
She’ll look at you and say to you I guess what’s done is done.
It’s so ironic don’t you think that I’ve been the lucky one.

- the daughter you won’t see will always be the best part of you and me.
Chorus
A part of me still loves you for the love she gives to me.
A part of me still hates you for the daughter you won’t see.
but love you or hate you you’ll still be a part of me.


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#1166474 - 07/11/20 11:05 AM Re: A part of me [Re: ckiphen]  
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I get it, but there's a lot of back and forth. I wondered how it would go if you dropped the hate and focussed on him. ( you may think that you're together but there's part of you that's missing)
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#1166496 - 07/11/20 06:05 PM Re: A part of me [Re: ckiphen]  
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Hi CK,
It's an interesting write. I like how it's written. Honestly, I couldn't find it in my heart to love any part of a loser who would abandon his child, or a mother who abandons hers. I was a single father for a lot of years. I am a firm believer that if you do want the responsibility of being a parent you shouldn't procreate.


Have a goodun,

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#1167032 - 07/27/20 07:06 AM Re: A part of me [Re: ckiphen]  
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Appreciate the feedback.


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