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Mutlu
by Gary E. Andrews - 04/15/24 07:08 PM
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Leafs
by Gary E. Andrews - 04/05/24 01:49 PM
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Hi All, A different kind of love song. Fresh ink. My muse kept me awake with an alternate bridge. Please let me know which you like best and why.
Your Guitar You play your music every night For people everywhere You open up your heart For everyone to share The lyrics written in your blood And watered by your tears The chords and melodies are Your happiness and fears
I want to be your guitar----------------} Chorus Your fingers on my strings Feel all your emotions Every single thing Your heart beat against me With all of your songs I want to be your guitar As the crowd sings along
Your life is one with the road I really understand This is to let you know This woman needs her man I close my eyes at night Pretend I am with you It holds the tears inside And keeps me from the blues
I want to be your guitar----------------} Chorus Your fingers on my strings Feel all your emotions Every single thing Your heart beat against me With all of your songs I want to be your guitar As the crowd sings along
I hope that you know-------------------} Bridge The boys sure miss you too We are right there with you In everything you do
(Wrap your arms around me-------------------} Alternate Bridge Make me resonate With songs of love and All that we hold dear)
Instrumental Break
I want to be your guitar----------------} Chorus Your fingers on my strings Feel all your emotions Every single thing Your heart beat against me With all of your songs I want to be your guitar As the crowd sings along
I want to be your guitar As the crowd sings along
Copyright 8/2020 John W Selleck BMI
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The alternate bridge I like it works well with the rest of the lyric. The bridge though I get what you are saying seems at odds with the rest of the lyric, as if the boys were suddenly sprung on us, if this makes sense John? It's a good romantic lyric, old school and works well Regards Other John
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
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Hi John, Thanks for the read, your comments, and your vote. I'm thinking my muse had it right too. It felt better but I like more than my own opinion sometimes.
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