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Mutlu
by Gary E. Andrews - 04/15/24 07:08 PM
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I've been writing for a long time, just haven't been sharing all my new songs as of yet. Yep, I've been getting better GRAVITY V1 Have you ever felt so unstoppable The world can’t dismantle your bliss The way you smile takes enemies blind To the light you possess To which they can’t coalesce V2 Defying gravity Doesn’t take too much ability If you wield one piece Of weaponry It’s the strength to feel alive And have wisdom to keep it together When they say you’re out of line CHORUS There’s nothing to regret Learn to survive Don’t let the world tell you otherwise It only takes the ability to break through To exercise your faith So if you’re willing to change Go forth, it’s never too late V3 Have you ever vied to seek the truth Even when you’re surrounded by bad news You don’t have to feel the negativity Break down and feel the energy Surrounding you V4 Let go and find the truth That will set you free The lies may wrap you around to your death But in reality You can defy the expectations That you don’t realize If you look your potential eye to eye CHORUS There’s nothing to regret Learn to survive Don’t let the world tell you otherwise It only takes the ability to break through To exercise your faith So if you’re willing to change Go forth, it’s never too late BRIDGE When you feel unstoppable The world is yours More beautiful than you may realize You may doubt who you are right now But if you conquer your sadness Your anger Your fear You can start to rise above CHORUS X2 There’s nothing to regret Learn to survive Don’t let the world tell you otherwise It only takes the ability to break through To exercise your faith So if you’re willing to change Go forth, it’s never too late There’s nothing to regret Learn to survive Don’t let the world tell you otherwise It only takes the ability to break through To exercise your faith So if you’re willing to change Go forth, it’s never too late. ©️l.simone
Aries. INFP-T. Artist of all trades. Listener and creator of vast, unexpected musical genre writings/compositions. Art is the journey of a free soul. -Alev Oguz http://soundcloud.com/lunasimone
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Hi Luna, Very nice. The only nit I have, is you only hit your title/hook one time, in a verse. I would make your title one of the lines/pieces of your chorus, to make it more memorable. Maybe "Learn to Survive"
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