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FINDERS KEEPERS
c2019 Brian Beecher
When you left her alone on the dance floor It caused my racing heart to pick up speed Being mindful that it’s finders keepers Cause she wasn’t the one that you need
Often it’s what you say and how you say it That will turn a good woman away Leave you feeling alone and isolated Buddy I am now here to save the day
I will ask her for a dance and take it from there And hope that she will run her fingers through my hair
Then I’ll show her the love she’s been lacking And will make it as good as can be Just remember that it’s finders keepers And tonight she’ll be going home with me
I will ask her for a dance and take it from there And hope that she will run her fingers through my hair
Then I’ll show her the love she’s been lacking And will make it as good as can be Just remember that it’s finders keepers And tonight she’ll be going home with me And tonight she’ll be going home with me
After a long hiatus due to all the COVID related restrictions I am back and posting and critiquing once again. Will be slow at first as we are only allowed 45 minutes per day on computers. Have a ways to go yet with my 2019 batch before posting for this year.
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Hi Beech, I like the title/idea, but I think it would be stronger if it was formed around him with the girl rather than what he intends to do, all the best.john
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Thanks for giving this one a look. Never know what can result when you put your ideas into motion. Sometimes though I need to give myself the proverbial kick in the butt that I need to finish what I start.
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Hi Brian, I agree with John. tell us why you want to be with her, does she look beautiful, seem sweet, is there a certain look in her eyes that draws you?
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Subject may on the other hand be only as interested as having a potential dance partner for one dance or rest of evening perhaps. Don't recall having any special inspiration for this. Probably just had the title in mind and this is what I got out of that title.
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