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NEW LYRIC -- COMMENTS
NO MORE YOU ©2010 Mackie Humphries V1 Empty hearts get no satisfaction Empty souls get no reaction Without someone to lean on Here I am almost gone. PRE-CH No one to talk to No one to hold No more you CH Empty arms are reaching out Empty eyes looking about Without your sweet loving Here I am alone. BR All I ever dreamed of was our life together Now it seems everything’s gone forever You rest at angels feet in Heaven Only God knows why. PRE CH No more real love No more kissin’ hugs No more you CH Empty arms are reaching out Empty eyes looking about Without your sweet loving Here I am alone. TAG No More you
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Randy--
I wasn't satisfied with the lyric until I slept on it.
RE-READ THE BRIDGE.
Sometimes we don't know why we're left alone.
I appreciate you stopping by, and your well taken comments.
Later,
Mackie
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This is cool Makie!! Cheers on that
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Aaron--
Thanks for the visit and comment.
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Randy,
I think you are right; the last line in the bridge is out--there will be some that say the dangling WHY, should be rhymed--in this case, I agree with your logic!
Thanks for helping me see the light.
I used to write poetry in my twenties, but now I just feel good if I write something that a few can identify with.
Mackie
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