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Hey folks....been lying low lately....too hot here....really can't record much during this weather for various reasons at my home....anywho.... First....what a great track by Mr. Kaufman...I adapted a song lyrically I have posted here before....Tom Breshers and his Timeless Band did the original backing for this song....so now we have two versions...vocally I didn't hit this one the way I wanted to...missed a few notes....lol....old age....it gets tougher....no lie....so be easy on me.... I heard this song as a soul tune....ala..."When A Man Loves A Woman" type song...it's not even close to that classic...lol....but you know what I'm talking about.... Also....Welcome back to my good friend Tom Breshers.....I hope all your health issues are doing better....I could never thank Tom enough for all the help he has given me here.....what a great guy....look forward to talking to you.....Why don't you post "My Friend The Blues"....one of your best...imho.... I hope Mark likes this one....thanks again....Mark is such a talented guy....what an honor to do something of his..... http://soundclick.com/share?songid=9244729Here are my lyrics... I Can See It In Your Eyes (It’s Over) ©-2010 Pickens/lyrics/Kaufman/music I can see in your eyes I can tell the way you look I can see in your eyes Don’t tell me I’m wrong I’m Trying to be strong I’m trying to be strong But that ain’t so easy I can’t read your mind But I can see it,I can see it, in your eyes, in your eyes I’m not gonna say that I don’t care I’m not gonna say that I’m not hurt I’m not gonna say I don’t think it’s fair I’m just waitin’ for you to say I’m just waitin” for you to say I’ts over, It’s over Break You say we can be just friends Let me ask you…has hell froze over again You go your way I’ll go mine Have a great life don’t you worry, don’t you worry Oh I’ll be fine, I’ll be fine, I’ll be ok I can’t read your mind But I can see it,I can see it, in your eyes in your eyes I’m not gonna say that I don’t care I’m not gonna say that I’m not hurt I’m not gonna say I don’t think it’s fair I’m just waitin’ for you to say I’m just waitin” for you to say I’ts over, It’s over Let’s not try to place any blame Chalk it off as part of the game Cause that’s all it is…. I’m not gonna say that I don’t care I’m not gonna say that I’m not hurt I’m not gonna say I don’t think it’s fair I’m just waitin’ for you to say I’m just waitin” for you to say I’ts over, It’s over…
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Hi Bob
I think you did a terrific job and the more you work it will smooth any spots that you don't like, I think ; ) jm
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COOL!!! Now it's an R&B track! Really like it, T-Bob! Thanks.
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This challenge thing of Mark's has been so fun to listen to! What a different take everyone has on this track.
Mr. Bob, Dude, yer a soul singer fer sure! You've made the lyrics and delivery such a perfect match with Mark's composition.
yerz, Ellen
hope it cools off up there in Georgia....down my way, folks are developing gills to be able to breathe when they go outside!
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Thanks Joice....I feel I could have done better....I don't spend alot of time on things.....this was about three takes....I fit my lyrics in and then away we go....glad you liked it....I liked your version, too....Bob Hi Bob
I think you did a terrific job and the more you work it will smooth any spots that you don't like, I think ; ) jm
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Thanks Mark...I'm glad you liked this....thanks to you also for giving out a great track like this one.....the keyboard really pulled me into this one...loved that...thanks again....T-Bob COOL!!! Now it's an R&B track! Really like it, T-Bob! Thanks.
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Otis Redding back to life. You've made this sound like Motown Bob. Great job. Best I've heard in the challenge yet and there have been some good ones.
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Thanks Ellen...I love doing a track of some one elses music....I'm so lazy....lol.....and I never could come close to making music like this Mark K, dude....he is awesome....glad you enjoyed it.....Bob This challenge thing of Mark's has been so fun to listen to! What a different take everyone has on this track.
Mr. Bob, Dude, yer a soul singer fer sure! You've made the lyrics and delivery such a perfect match with Mark's composition.
yerz, Ellen
hope it cools off up there in Georgia....down my way, folks are developing gills to be able to breathe when they go outside!
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Hot dang Robert....man...you are sounding sooooo good here!!
My goodness....your voice truly reminds me of David Ruffin (I Wish It Would Rain)....gosh I could listen to him all day...and you know what....I'm gonna go click this on and listen again...
Fabulous job on this challenge Robert...and I LOVE your soulful voice.
My best to you, Gail
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Know what you mean about this HOT weather...It's 90 here in Nashville today, suppose to be 92 tomorrow...I think we're all in for a long hot summer.
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When I heard this track I felt it was perfect for you Bob. You brought your own unique style. Nice song and great vocals. Hope niteshift bumps you up from the Holiday Inn to a classier hotel.
Rick
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Hi Bob, How'd you get so cool. this is nice... Let me ask you…has hell froze over again GREAT PERFORMANCE. Calvin http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/calvinstewart
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Steven...thanks...but way too kind....but don't think I don't appreciate that....Bob Otis Redding back to life. You've made this sound like Motown Bob. Great job. Best I've heard in the challenge yet and there have been some good ones.
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Gail....thanks for all the kind words....David Ruffin was one of my all time favorites....and "I wish It would Rain" a great song, I loved it...thanks again for listening twice....Bob
Hot dang Robert....man...you are sounding sooooo good here!!
My goodness....your voice truly reminds me of David Ruffin (I Wish It Would Rain)....gosh I could listen to him all day...and you know what....I'm gonna go click this on and listen again...
Fabulous job on this challenge Robert...and I LOVE your soulful voice.
My best to you, Gail
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Know what you mean about this HOT weather...It's 90 here in Nashville today, suppose to be 92 tomorrow...I think we're all in for a long hot summer.
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Hey Rick....love this track Mark put together....love the keyboard....they revoked my "Priority Club" card at the Holiday Inn....on to the Hampton Inn...lol...I may try standing up next time I sing this one...lol....Bob When I heard this track I felt it was perfect for you Bob. You brought your own unique style. Nice song and great vocals. Hope niteshift bumps you up from the Holiday Inn to a classier hotel.
Rick
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Tbob, Cool song works with the backing...I don't remember doing this one... old age? Who is Mark Kaufman and why is he challenged ? Just kidding Mark cool backing track.... tom
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Hey Calvin....."How'd did you get so cool"....new air conditioners....lol....you can't freeze hell in Georgia, that's for sure....hot as hell here...thanks for listening, Calvin....Bob
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Hey There Bob,
As Ellen said, it's sure been fun to hear the different interpretations of Mark's track. You got yourself a little LUTHER goin' on in this one. Thanks for delivering a very nice treatment of some very poignant lyrics.
Take care, Beth
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Tommy...you and Sam did the music for me on this one...the lyrics are changed up some to fit this music... Mark is definitely a talented dude....it is a cool backing track.... Thanks for checking this out....have a great day, my friend....Bobby Tbob, Cool song works with the backing...I don't remember doing this one... old age? Who is Mark Kaufman and why is he challenged ? Just kidding Mark cool backing track.... tom
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Beth...thanks for the nice comments, glad you enjoyed it...it is a great track by Mark....Bob Hey There Bob,
As Ellen said, it's sure been fun to hear the different interpretations of Mark's track. You got yourself a little LUTHER goin' on in this one. Thanks for delivering a very nice treatment of some very poignant lyrics.
Take care, Beth
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Really great Bob. This track is perfect for your vocal. (a great vocal as always).
Peace,
Ian
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Hey Bob,
Yeah, a good listen, as always. It meanders a little, but that's half it's charm. Very relaxing.
cheers, niteshift
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Hey Ian...appreciate the kind words....I really thought I could do better on the vocal....but everytime I try to fix what I thought I messed up, I screw up something else...lol....appreciate you checking this out....Bob Really great Bob. This track is perfect for your vocal. (a great vocal as always).
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Geoff.....I'm a life time member of "Meanders United"....lol...thanks for listening, mate...T-Bob Hey Bob,
Yeah, a good listen, as always. It meanders a little, but that's half it's charm. Very relaxing.
cheers, niteshift
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Nice job boys. Meandering isn't all that bad especially when it's really good.
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Hi Bob,
Wow, I didn't see this one coming! You really did make this all your own. I like where you took it. Sweet!
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Very cool, Bob! That backing track is perfect for your style - this came out great. I thought the vocal was top-notch. Any spots that you might consider "rough", I consider "real" Great job! Scott
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Bob,
I really think you captured that late 60's vibe quite well. Could almost imagine couple slow dancing to this. Well done!
Tom W.
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Hi Bob, WAY TO GO, you sing it so well. Amazing! Congratulations to all of you, hah. Golly gosh, I've missed you all, keep up with the great talent hey, this Aussie girl just loves listening. I bet I've missed out on listening to a lot of great songs hey. Big hugs Michele
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Kevin...hope you and the family are well....thanks for checking this one out...appreciate it....Bob Nice job boys. Meandering isn't all that bad especially when it's really good.
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Thanks Ricki....Mark's track is so good....I loved the keyboard in here....thanks for listening....appreciate it...Bob Hi Bob,
Wow, I didn't see this one coming! You really did make this all your own. I like where you took it. Sweet!
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Thanks Scott.....it's weird for me when people really like my stuff.....all I ever hear are the mistakes in it....lol...true...but don't ever think I don't like it when folks like what I do....I'm truly appreciative....if I went back and tried to fix something, I'd screw up something else....lol....so I guess "it's real" is good....thank you for that....Mark's track is excellent....what a talent....take care my friend.....Bob Very cool, Bob! That backing track is perfect for your style - this came out great. I thought the vocal was top-notch. Any spots that you might consider "rough", I consider "real" Great job! Scott
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Thank you Tom...60's is me for sure, my favorite music era....appreciate you listening....Bob Bob,
I really think you captured that late 60's vibe quite well. Could almost imagine couple slow dancing to this. Well done!
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Hey Michelle...I always enjoy your songs, too....thanks for checking this one out....apppreciate it.....Bob Hi Bob, WAY TO GO, you sing it so well. Amazing! Congratulations to all of you, hah. Golly gosh, I've missed you all, keep up with the great talent hey, this Aussie girl just loves listening. I bet I've missed out on listening to a lot of great songs hey. Big hugs Michele
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