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#995321 - 02/10/13 07:46 PM Heaven's Train, Mackie and Vic collab  
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Mackie sent me the lyrics just before my hard drive gave up on me. All up and running again now.
I tweaked a little and put music to it.
I may add another harmony voice later.
Suggestions welcome.
Listen to the wav on Soundcloud here
http://soundcloud.com/vic-arnold/heavens-train
[color:#3366FF](The above link is now remixed with added vocal backing by Tammy).[/color] Thanks Tammy.

or original mp3 here on Soundclick.
http://sclk.co/s78mbf

Vic

INTRO
Heavenís Trainís coming one of these days
And all our troubles will be taken, taken away.

VERSE1
The track is narrow to the promised land
Believe in Him and take his hand
When darkness falls Heíll shine His light
No standiní in line or tickets to buy.
CH
Heavenís Trainís coming (itís the gospel word)
Angels will be singiní (ďcome on get on boardĒ)
Only true believers (will get on to ride)
Heavenís Trainís coming. It could be ..... It could be tonight.

..........................SOLO....................... as chorus

VERSE2
The Conductor says thereís room for all
Stand or sit, just heed His Call
The Pearly Gates will open wide
This line's for everlasting life
CH
Heavenís Trainís coming (itís the gospel word)
Angels will be singiní (ďcome on get on boardĒ)
Only true believers (will get on to ride)
Heavenís Trainís coming. It could be ..... It could be tonight.
CH
Heavenís Trainís coming itís the gospel word
Angels will be singiní ďcome get on boardĒ
Only true believers will get to ride
Heavenís Trainís coming It could be ..... It could be tonight.

TAG
Heavenís Trainís coming.
Heavenís Trainís coming.
Heavenís Trainís coming.
Heavenís Trainís coming. It could be ..... It could be tonight.

Last edited by Vicarn; 02/12/13 11:37 AM.

It's never too late? Yes it is, so do it now.

If, given time, a monkey can write the complete works of Shakespeare maybe there's hope for me.

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#995323 - 02/10/13 07:57 PM Re: Heaven's Train, Mackie and Vic collab [Re: Vicarn]  
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Mackie & Vic, I can hear the clickity clack as the train rolls down the track. You guys got a good one here. The Man in Black would surely love it. It would fit right in on his train LP.

As usual, Vic does a great job with the playing, singing and engineering. I can almost hear the Angels singing. But I hope not tonight.

A real fine job, gentlemen.


Write from your heart, not what you think others want to hear.

https://dansullivan2.bandcamp.com

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#995327 - 02/10/13 08:27 PM Re: Heaven's Train, Mackie and Vic collab [Re: Vicarn]  
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Thoroughly Enjoyed..Great message Amen!


Peace Love and Songwriting
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#995328 - 02/10/13 08:42 PM Re: Heaven's Train, Mackie and Vic collab [Re: Dan Sullivan]  
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DAN--

I LOVE WHAT VIC DID WITH THIS ONE--IT'S OUR THIRD CO-LAB--ON TOP OF THAT IT'S SUNDAY--THAT MEANS SOMETHING, EH!

I HOPE VIC GETS AN ALBUM OUT THAT DOES WELL--HE COULD INCLUDE THIS ONE-- WOULDN'T THAT BE SOMETHING!

GREAT JOB VIC!

Mackie


#995329 - 02/10/13 08:50 PM Re: Heaven's Train, Mackie and Vic collab [Re: jimmycraig]  
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JIMMY--

THANKS FOR THE POSITIVE FEEDBACK SIR--WE APPRECIATE YOUR INPUT!

LISTENED TO SOME OF YOUR SONGS--SOUNDS LIKE YOU ARE HAVING FUN DOING THIS SONGWRITING THING TOO! GOOD LUCK --

Mackie

#995346 - 02/11/13 02:33 AM Re: Heaven's Train, Mackie and Vic collab [Re: Mackie H.]  
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Vic/Mackie,

I really enjoyed this tune/performance/ & mix--very nice job. Perfect key for your voice Vic. This story has been done often, but always a popular story to tell--nicely done Mackey.

There are some things you could add to the mix, but I think this song sounds good without too much going on. A little harmony rather than a lot, keeps this one sounding less like a group and more like a singular artist which fits this music.

It might be interesting hearing a short solo interlude where you have the solo now, and possibly the main solo between the latter two choruses. I sort of felt that with this ballad a 2nd verse felt natural to me after the first chorus since you went into the chorus after one verse. (I like the chorus early though) My preference is usually for solos to be mid to later depending on the song--but there is always exceptions and of course different opinions.

Super job! I could listen to this one over and over.

steady-eddie.

#995361 - 02/11/13 07:43 AM Re: Heaven's Train, Mackie and Vic collab [Re: E Swartz]  
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Hi guys,

GOOD train song, & I enjoyed the performance too. !


Calvin


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#995362 - 02/11/13 07:51 AM Re: Heaven's Train, Mackie and Vic collab [Re: Calvin]  
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Excellent song, eerily like the late and much lamented Johnny Cash vocal and content wise.
Best of luck with this one Vic/Mackie
Travis


We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
#995376 - 02/11/13 12:29 PM Re: Heaven's Train, Mackie and Vic collab [Re: Travis david]  
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hey,will there be a lounge car on this train?No,really guys,this one is awesome!Everything is right on track with it!Nice job Vic!Cool lyrics Mackie!Mike

#995441 - 02/11/13 06:24 PM Re: Heaven's Train, Mackie and Vic collab [Re: Michael LeBlanc]  
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Nice Man In Black song you guys ....good work
doug


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Grace..Peace...Love

#995460 - 02/11/13 08:23 PM Re: Heaven's Train, Mackie and Vic collab [Re: E Swartz]  
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STEADY-EDDY--

WITHOUT VIC, IT WOULD BE JUST ANOTHER TRAIN SONG--JOHNNY CASH MAY EVEN BE ON THE TRAIN!

VIC GAVE IT STYLE--WE APPRECIATE YOU GIVING A LISTEN--VIC WILL PROBABLY MAKE SOME CHANGES--

Mackie

#995463 - 02/11/13 08:32 PM Re: Heaven's Train, Mackie and Vic collab [Re: Mackie H.]  
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Hey guys great tune love it

#995480 - 02/12/13 01:33 AM Re: Heaven's Train, Mackie and Vic collab [Re: James-T]  
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Hi Mackie and Vic,

I just escaped from the Devil's Train and I sure am RELIEVED to be on the right train now! I won't ever veer off on the wrong track again! LOL!

This does sound SO cool with Vic's Johnny Cash sound! I love what you've both created here!

Lisa


#995487 - 02/12/13 02:09 AM Re: Heaven's Train, Mackie and Vic collab [Re: Calvin]  
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CALVIN-

APPRECIATE YOUR FEEDBACK--THERE ARE MANY TRAIN SONGS: MYSTERY TRAINS, GOSPEL TRAINS, DEVIL'S TRAINS, BLUES TRAINS AND MANY OTHERSÖ.I RODE LOTS OF TRAINS IN MY LIFE--NOW THEY ARE FADING IN THE USA. I GUESS I WROTE THE ORIGINAL LYRIC FOR THE FINAL TRAIN RIDE: PERHAPS HEAVEN'S TRAIN, BECAUSE LIKE MANY, I'M A BELIEVER!

ALWAYS APPRECIATE YOUR THOUGHTS!

Mackie

#995489 - 02/12/13 02:13 AM Re: Heaven's Train, Mackie and Vic collab [Re: Travis david]  
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TRAVIS--

YOU'RE OVER THERE WITH VIC--KNOW WELL HIS WAY OF DELIVERING A MAN IN BLACK SONG--I LOVE WHAT HE DID WITH THIS ONE--MAYBE SOON WE'LL HEAR HIS THOUGHTS ON LAYING THIS ONE OUT, AND THE REASONS WHY, HE GAVE IT THIS PARTICULAR PRODUCTION!

THANKS!

Mackie

#995498 - 02/12/13 03:40 AM Re: Heaven's Train, Mackie and Vic collab [Re: Vicarn]  
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Excellent stuff here, fellas...lyric, tune...everything about it. You two do well together.

Stevie

#995502 - 02/12/13 04:02 AM Re: Heaven's Train, Mackie and Vic collab [Re: Little_stevie_b]  
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This Baby's got a FULL Head-of-Steam, Gents!!!

Like it So Much I'm goin' Right-Back for 'Nuther Listenin'!!!

Good Luck with a WINNER, Vic & Mackie...JC Rides Again!!!

Best Wishes & a Big Guys-Hug,
Stan

#995507 - 02/12/13 07:19 AM Re: Heaven's Train, Mackie and Vic collab [Re: "Tampa Stan" Good (D)]  
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Dan. As a fellow train song writer we appreciate those words
from you.
There's something about that clickety clack rhythm that I love.
Glad you liked it.
Vic


It's never too late? Yes it is, so do it now.

If, given time, a monkey can write the complete works of Shakespeare maybe there's hope for me.

http://store.cdbaby.com/cd/vicarnold2

http://www.soundclick.com/vicarnold

http://soundcloud.com/vic-arnold

#995508 - 02/12/13 07:19 AM Re: Heaven's Train, Mackie and Vic collab [Re: Vicarn]  
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Thank you Jimmy.
Vic


It's never too late? Yes it is, so do it now.

If, given time, a monkey can write the complete works of Shakespeare maybe there's hope for me.

http://store.cdbaby.com/cd/vicarnold2

http://www.soundclick.com/vicarnold

http://soundcloud.com/vic-arnold

#995509 - 02/12/13 07:27 AM Re: Heaven's Train, Mackie and Vic collab [Re: Vicarn]  
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Mackie. Give me 10 years to get into training. You have to be fit to make an album.
Another 20 years to save enough to get the production done.
Hmmmmm, I wonder if I'll be too old then.
But, I really enjoyed doing this one with you.
Vic


It's never too late? Yes it is, so do it now.

If, given time, a monkey can write the complete works of Shakespeare maybe there's hope for me.

http://store.cdbaby.com/cd/vicarnold2

http://www.soundclick.com/vicarnold

http://soundcloud.com/vic-arnold

#995518 - 02/12/13 11:38 AM Re: Heaven's Train, Mackie and Vic collab [Re: Vicarn]  
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Just added Tammy's vocal into the backing on the Soundcloud version.
Thank you Tammy.
Vic


It's never too late? Yes it is, so do it now.

If, given time, a monkey can write the complete works of Shakespeare maybe there's hope for me.

http://store.cdbaby.com/cd/vicarnold2

http://www.soundclick.com/vicarnold

http://soundcloud.com/vic-arnold

#995563 - 02/12/13 03:15 PM Re: Heaven's Train, Mackie and Vic collab [Re: Vicarn]  
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Eddie.
It could be that way too.
Thank you for the sugs.
Vic


It's never too late? Yes it is, so do it now.

If, given time, a monkey can write the complete works of Shakespeare maybe there's hope for me.

http://store.cdbaby.com/cd/vicarnold2

http://www.soundclick.com/vicarnold

http://soundcloud.com/vic-arnold

#995564 - 02/12/13 03:16 PM Re: Heaven's Train, Mackie and Vic collab [Re: Michael LeBlanc]  
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MICHAEL--

I GUESS YOU COULD BRING YOUR OWN, UNLESS THE TRAIN'S CROWDED!

THANKS FOR CHECKING ON OUR CO-LAB!

Mackie

#995565 - 02/12/13 03:18 PM Re: Heaven's Train, Mackie and Vic collab [Re: Doug Healey]  
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DOUG--

THANKS FOR GIVING US A LISTEN--LOTS OF US WANT TO BE ON THAT TRAIN--

Mackie

#995572 - 02/12/13 04:30 PM Re: Heaven's Train, Mackie and Vic collab [Re: James-T]  
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JAMES T--

WE APPRECIATE YOUR POSITIVE TAKE ON THIS ONE!

Mackie

#995573 - 02/12/13 04:34 PM Re: Heaven's Train, Mackie and Vic collab [Re: Little_stevie_b]  
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STEVIE--

THANKS FOR LISTENING--WE APPRECIATE YOUR POSITIVE FEEDBACK! I HOPE DOWN THE ROAD, VIC AND I HAVE ANOTHER CO-LAB!

Mackie

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LISA--

GIRL, GLAD YOU'RE ON BOARD--VIC'S PICKING MADE IT A SONG!

Mackie

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Beautiful song. Loved it. Being new to the board, I must say I am somewhat surprised at all the train songs. Was there a theme this week or something? In any event, really great write, nice performance and eery how much THe Man in Black's imprint is on this song. Nice job.

Dave

#995583 - 02/12/13 05:46 PM Re: Heaven's Train, Mackie and Vic collab [Re: "Tampa Stan" Good (D)]  
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STAN THE MAN--

WE ALWAYS LISTEN TO YOUR FEEDBACK--I ORIGINALLY WROTE THIS LYRIC AS THE LAST TRAIN. IT LAY DORMANT FOR A LONG TIME AND I DID SEVERAL RE-WRITES--VIC CHANGED SOME THINGS FOR THE BETTER, ESPECIALLY VERSE 2--

VIC IS GREAT TO WORK WITH--THAT MAKES IT EASY FOR ME--

YOU MAY HAVE TO DO A TRAIN SONG YOURSELF!

Mackie

#995584 - 02/12/13 05:53 PM Re: Heaven's Train, Mackie and Vic collab [Re: GocartMoz]  
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I thought the hook and melody were spot on and captured the feel of the song, which is everything. A few suggests:

A few timing issues against the beat early on but got better. These grooves are tough to get 100% correct.

Thought Tam's vocal fit nice in the mix; I might have come in on the last line of verse 2 w/a harmony as well.

Vic, I think the solo after chorus 1 is misplaced. Would rather hear it after chorus 2, then repeat your choruses as there's no bridge. Also, I'd open with a shorter version of that solo--more a riff, even bookending it at the end. But it has to be more precise than just meandering around. I would do a riff of more lower notes IMO.

Nice work all...always fun w/Mack!

Zeek

#995586 - 02/12/13 06:11 PM Re: Heaven's Train, Mackie and Vic collab [Re: GocartMoz]  
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DAVE--

YOU JUST HAPPENED TO DROP IN ON A BUNCH OF TRAIN SONGS--WE APPRECIATE YOUR THOUGHTS ON THIS ONE--IT'S NOT MY FIRST TRAIN LYRIC--THROUGH THE YEARS I'VE PENNED SEVERAL--THERE'S SOMETHING MYSTIC ABOUT TRAINS ROLLING ON!

THANKS FOR LISTENING TO OUR HEAVEN'S TRAIN --STAY WITH US FOR A WHILE--

Mackie

#995587 - 02/12/13 06:15 PM Re: Heaven's Train, Mackie and Vic collab [Re: Zeek]  
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ZEEK--

THIS IS MORE A VIC ATTACK THAN A MACK ONE--I LET HIM DO HIS THING WITH THIS ONE--I'M SURE HE'LL GET BACK TO YOU ON THE SUGGESTIONS--I TEND TO AGREE ON PLACEMENT OF SOLO--WE APPRECIATE YOUR FEEDBACK SIR!

Mackie

#995601 - 02/12/13 08:31 PM Re: Heaven's Train, Mackie and Vic collab [Re: Mackie H.]  
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Calvin, thats good to hear.
Thank you.
Vic


It's never too late? Yes it is, so do it now.

If, given time, a monkey can write the complete works of Shakespeare maybe there's hope for me.

http://store.cdbaby.com/cd/vicarnold2

http://www.soundclick.com/vicarnold

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#995602 - 02/12/13 08:34 PM Re: Heaven's Train, Mackie and Vic collab [Re: Vicarn]  
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Hi Travis.
Train songs and JC sort of go together.
We're happy you liked it.
Vic


It's never too late? Yes it is, so do it now.

If, given time, a monkey can write the complete works of Shakespeare maybe there's hope for me.

http://store.cdbaby.com/cd/vicarnold2

http://www.soundclick.com/vicarnold

http://soundcloud.com/vic-arnold

#995648 - 02/13/13 08:03 AM Re: Heaven's Train, Mackie and Vic collab [Re: Vicarn]  
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No lounge Michael, but it stops frequently.
Vic


It's never too late? Yes it is, so do it now.

If, given time, a monkey can write the complete works of Shakespeare maybe there's hope for me.

http://store.cdbaby.com/cd/vicarnold2

http://www.soundclick.com/vicarnold

http://soundcloud.com/vic-arnold

#995684 - 02/13/13 03:02 PM Re: Heaven's Train, Mackie and Vic collab [Re: Vicarn]  
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Thanks Doug.
Thanks James.
Vic


It's never too late? Yes it is, so do it now.

If, given time, a monkey can write the complete works of Shakespeare maybe there's hope for me.

http://store.cdbaby.com/cd/vicarnold2

http://www.soundclick.com/vicarnold

http://soundcloud.com/vic-arnold

#995745 - 02/13/13 11:21 PM Re: Heaven's Train, Mackie and Vic collab [Re: Vicarn]  
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Lisa.
We are now dog and train linked.
Vic


It's never too late? Yes it is, so do it now.

If, given time, a monkey can write the complete works of Shakespeare maybe there's hope for me.

http://store.cdbaby.com/cd/vicarnold2

http://www.soundclick.com/vicarnold

http://soundcloud.com/vic-arnold

#995746 - 02/13/13 11:37 PM Re: Heaven's Train, Mackie and Vic collab [Re: Vicarn]  
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Tammy's harmony really elevated the song to a new level.


Write from your heart, not what you think others want to hear.

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http://www.cdbaby.com/cd/dansullivan2
#995767 - 02/14/13 08:55 AM Re: Heaven's Train, Mackie and Vic collab [Re: Dan Sullivan]  
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Thank you Stevie.


It's never too late? Yes it is, so do it now.

If, given time, a monkey can write the complete works of Shakespeare maybe there's hope for me.

http://store.cdbaby.com/cd/vicarnold2

http://www.soundclick.com/vicarnold

http://soundcloud.com/vic-arnold

#995793 - 02/14/13 01:02 PM Re: Heaven's Train, Mackie and Vic collab [Re: Vicarn]  
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Hi Stan.
Glad you enjoyed it.
Where have you been?
Vic


It's never too late? Yes it is, so do it now.

If, given time, a monkey can write the complete works of Shakespeare maybe there's hope for me.

http://store.cdbaby.com/cd/vicarnold2

http://www.soundclick.com/vicarnold

http://soundcloud.com/vic-arnold

#995796 - 02/14/13 01:05 PM Re: Heaven's Train, Mackie and Vic collab [Re: Vicarn]  
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Dave, welcome.
You can wait weeks for a train song, then you get a bunch of them in a day.
Vic


It's never too late? Yes it is, so do it now.

If, given time, a monkey can write the complete works of Shakespeare maybe there's hope for me.

http://store.cdbaby.com/cd/vicarnold2

http://www.soundclick.com/vicarnold

http://soundcloud.com/vic-arnold

#995834 - 02/14/13 05:02 PM Re: Heaven's Train, Mackie and Vic collab [Re: Vicarn]  
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Vic/Mackie & Tammy,

Good times here! Love all of it. I remember a few other times there was train week. Clint Anglin sent me a whole cd full of em...never tire of train songs...

tom

#995841 - 02/14/13 05:35 PM Re: Heaven's Train, Mackie and Vic collab [Re: Tom Breshers]  
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this would make a great gospel song for sure, love the lyrics,they speak to the heart, and I love trains....always did. ~~MFB III

Last edited by MFB III; 02/14/13 05:35 PM.
#995857 - 02/14/13 09:58 PM Re: Heaven's Train, Mackie and Vic collab [Re: MFB III]  
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MFB--

WE APPRECIATE YOU TAKING A LISTEN AND YOUR THOUGHTS!

LATER,

Mackie

#995861 - 02/15/13 01:34 AM Re: Heaven's Train, Mackie and Vic collab [Re: Mackie H.]  
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Hey guys.... this one is a keeper for sure!! I'm not much into writing gospel but I think you guys did a great job. I enjoyed it!! :))) scotty

#995878 - 02/15/13 08:43 AM Re: Heaven's Train, Mackie and Vic collab [Re: Richard Scott]  
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Zeek.
I have improved a couple of timing issues at the beginning.
(Not uploaded yet).
It's interesting what you say about the choruses and the instrumental. My original idea was to have a train arriving on a fade and also departing at the end without any instruments at all. Nothing is set in stone though. I may have another look at it.
Thanks for taking the time.
Vic


It's never too late? Yes it is, so do it now.

If, given time, a monkey can write the complete works of Shakespeare maybe there's hope for me.

http://store.cdbaby.com/cd/vicarnold2

http://www.soundclick.com/vicarnold

http://soundcloud.com/vic-arnold

#995879 - 02/15/13 08:46 AM Re: Heaven's Train, Mackie and Vic collab [Re: Dan Sullivan]  
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Dan.
You just made it onto Tammy's Christmas list. smile
Vic


It's never too late? Yes it is, so do it now.

If, given time, a monkey can write the complete works of Shakespeare maybe there's hope for me.

http://store.cdbaby.com/cd/vicarnold2

http://www.soundclick.com/vicarnold

http://soundcloud.com/vic-arnold

#995959 - 02/15/13 08:09 PM Re: Heaven's Train, Mackie and Vic collab [Re: Vicarn]  
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Thanks Tom.
You keep playing them.
Vic


It's never too late? Yes it is, so do it now.

If, given time, a monkey can write the complete works of Shakespeare maybe there's hope for me.

http://store.cdbaby.com/cd/vicarnold2

http://www.soundclick.com/vicarnold

http://soundcloud.com/vic-arnold

#995978 - 02/15/13 11:33 PM Re: Heaven's Train, Mackie and Vic collab [Re: Vicarn]  
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Thanks to the folks who even mention me, I was crazy happy to be a part of this wonderful song, a fantastic melody and lyric for sure!! I appreciate Vic's trust in giving me a shot to help with background vocals, his confidence in me does wonders for my self esteem and I am amazed by his talent and Mackie's wonderful idea for this lyric! Great song my friends!!

Tammy


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#995980 - 02/15/13 11:55 PM Re: Heaven's Train, Mackie and Vic collab [Re: TamsNumber4]  
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MFB
Thank you. I'm sure Mackie appreciates that (coming from yourself)as I do.
Vic


It's never too late? Yes it is, so do it now.

If, given time, a monkey can write the complete works of Shakespeare maybe there's hope for me.

http://store.cdbaby.com/cd/vicarnold2

http://www.soundclick.com/vicarnold

http://soundcloud.com/vic-arnold

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