another attempt at a song that doubles that splitting with a friend or breaking up. Advice or comments, whatever, drop it all below! Highly appreciated folks


©luna simone

v1
Nothing like moving on
Some people cry for crying out loud
Some are good at being strong

PRECHOR
Believe it or not, there is an inbetween
They say the best way to love and forgive others
Is to love yourself
It's just I can't help but say
I start feeling stranger the more I walk away

CHORUS
Believe me I'm being honest
When I say
It'll take time to search myself out
Cause when I look into myself
I don't see who I was quite the same way
All I know it's somehow better
The more I fight the demons
In myself that you left with me
There’s nothing like letting go
And freeing self of toxicity.

v2
Nothing like moving on
Some people cry for crying out loud
Yet some will go with the flow feel the fever
As they become brand new in the snap of a finger

PRECHOR
I envy those people wondering if they envy me
But then again if feeling revenge
Is all the world will see
So I guess that I can’t help but say
The world may change but I will be the same

CHORUS
Believe me I'm being honest
When I say
It'll take time to search myself out
Cause when I look into myself
I don't see who I was quite the same way
All I know it's somehow better
The more I fight the demons
In myself that you left with me
There's nothing like letting go
And freeing self of toxicity.

REPEAT CHOR AND BOTH PRECHORUSES
Believe me I'm being honest
When I say
It'll take time to search myself out
Cause when I look into myself
I don't see who I was quite the same way
All I know it's somehow better
The more I fight the demons
In myself that you left with me
There's nothing like letting go of it all
And freeing self of toxicity.

(v1)
Nothing like moving on
Some people cry for crying out loud
Some are good at being strong

(v2)
Nothing like moving on
Some people cry for crying out loud
Some even go with the flow feel the fever
As they become brand new in the snap of a finger

Believe me I'm being honest
When I say
It'll take time to search myself out
Cause when I look into myself
I don't see who I was quite the same way
All I know it's somehow better
The more I fight the demons
In myself that you left with me
There's nothing like letting go
And freeing self of toxicity.

"I start feeling stranger the more I walk away"

This line jumps out at me! Love it!

Check out "Untitled" in creative writing, would like your thoughts!

An outpouring from the heart and soul with some stellar thoghts to ponder. i enjoyed this set of lyrics.

Hi I thought it was a bit to wordy, felt like a long way to verse one, but oozes emotion.
all the best,john.