let in her light. - 12/18/19 01:47 AM
The last song in the song a week run.....song #105.
I feel this one needs some tweak but is a song I love and want to move forward with. I was in a bad/dreary headspace and was tired of being heart broken in the dead of a harsh winter......soo....with the first sunlight on my wall that season, out came this little number about spring.
all comments welcome but bear in mind....all I need is "is it worth pursuing" to YOUR ears?
https://maccharles.bandcamp.com/track/let-in-her-light
she mix her paint,
she dipping her paint brush-
she rain her blossom all over spring-
she give you bloom,
she silver your lining,
her cherry candy hang in the tree-
get outta bed,
put some cream in your coffee,
let in her light, let in her light-
red apple ribbon,
on a strawberry morning,
let in her light, let in her light-
she brush cotton candy,
into the sunrise-
she orange and yellow every bee-
she rose your glasses,
and butter your sunshine-
happy swimming like a bug in a jug of her honey tea-
get outta bed,
put some cream in your coffee,
let in her light, let in her light-
red apple ribbon,
on a strawberry morning,
let in her light, let in her light-
you're still in bed and playing dead again,
and the same old gray is hanging on your wall-
her light is shining, you should let her in,
open up and find yourself in love with it all-
get outta bed,
put some cream in your coffee,
let in her light, let in her light-
red apple ribbon,
on a strawberry morning,
let in her light, let in her light-
I feel this one needs some tweak but is a song I love and want to move forward with. I was in a bad/dreary headspace and was tired of being heart broken in the dead of a harsh winter......soo....with the first sunlight on my wall that season, out came this little number about spring.
all comments welcome but bear in mind....all I need is "is it worth pursuing" to YOUR ears?
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she mix her paint,
she dipping her paint brush-
she rain her blossom all over spring-
she give you bloom,
she silver your lining,
her cherry candy hang in the tree-
get outta bed,
put some cream in your coffee,
let in her light, let in her light-
red apple ribbon,
on a strawberry morning,
let in her light, let in her light-
she brush cotton candy,
into the sunrise-
she orange and yellow every bee-
she rose your glasses,
and butter your sunshine-
happy swimming like a bug in a jug of her honey tea-
get outta bed,
put some cream in your coffee,
let in her light, let in her light-
red apple ribbon,
on a strawberry morning,
let in her light, let in her light-
you're still in bed and playing dead again,
and the same old gray is hanging on your wall-
her light is shining, you should let her in,
open up and find yourself in love with it all-
get outta bed,
put some cream in your coffee,
let in her light, let in her light-
red apple ribbon,
on a strawberry morning,
let in her light, let in her light-
