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Marty Helly Serious Contributor Posts: 1052 From: Florence, MA, USA Registered: Jun 2001	posted 11-22-2004 01:30 This was started as an exercise for a JPF Chapter meeting last winter. Finally got it a little more coherent... ICE Marty Helly c. 2004 V.1 Its a cold February night Wind chills setting record lows Here inside it feels worse Sitting next to you The chill runs through my soul Ch. Your heart turned to ice Eyes a frosty glare Skin numb to my touch Flame that burned isn't there V.2 We met in the heat of summer Passion hot as the high noon sun Then leaves died and fell I was under your spell Didn't see what's to come V.3 December the cold crept in Arctic winds bringing sleet and snow As the river glazed over So did your heart The love there ceased to flow CH. Your heart turned to ice Eyes a frosty glare Skin numb to my touch Flame that burned isn't there T. Will spring soften the hardened heart Or will we just melt away ------------------ Marty listen here Is there a setting on the digital delay that will allow me to think before I speak? IP: Logged
shayneman Serious Contributor Posts: 422 From: Edmonton, KY USA Registered: Apr 2002	posted 11-22-2004 07:39 Condensing/comments below..sweep or keep: V.1 Wind chill(-s--delete) (setting--sets) (a) record low(-s--delete) (As)The chill runs through my soul V.2 Didn't see (what's--what was) to come V.3 Arctic winds (bringing--brought) sleet and snow T. Will spring soften (the--your) hardened heart ------------------ http://shayneman.proboards19.com/ IP: Logged
Marty Helly Serious Contributor Posts: 1052 From: Florence, MA, USA Registered: Jun 2001	posted 11-22-2004 10:12 Thanks for the comments Shayne As the chill ... feels to me like it could separate the chill from sitting next to you - like its caused more by the weather than the emotions. The last line of verse 2 is something I keep stumbling over - your wording may help. In the tag at the end, I've been thinking of using frozen heart in lieu of hardened heart. The lyric used to have the term "Ice" appear more often but it didn't sing well. ------------------ Marty listen here Is there a setting on the digital delay that will allow me to think before I speak? IP: Logged
Marty Helly Serious Contributor Posts: 1052 From: Florence, MA, USA Registered: Jun 2001	posted 12-08-2004 01:07 Latest update - mostly minor changes - will try to get the sound version posted soon. This one went over extremely well in its first public performance. Didn't hurt that it was a cold snowy night. ICE Marty Helly c. 2004 V.1 Its a cold February night Wind chills setting record lows Here inside it feels colder Lying next to you The chill runs through my soul Ch. Your heart turned to ice Eyes a frosty glare Skin numb to my touch Flame that burned isn't there V.2 We met in the heat of summer Passion hot as the high noon sun Then leaves died and fell under your spell Couldn't see what's to come V.3 December the cold crept in Arctic winds bringing sleet and snow As the river glazed over So did your heart The love there ceased to flow CH. Your heart turned to ice Eyes a frosty glare Skin numb to my touch Flame that burned isn't there T. Will spring soften the hardened heart Or will we just melt away ------------------ Marty listen here Is there a setting on the digital delay that will allow me to think before I speak? IP: Logged
Marty Helly Serious Contributor Posts: 1052 From: Florence, MA, USA Registered: Jun 2001	posted 12-09-2004 15:27 Noise added at soundclick. ICE ------------------ Marty my new home It may be cold out but you heart doesn't need to be. Make somebody smile today. IP: Logged

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