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Louis
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From: Brookwood, alabama
Registered: Sep 2004

posted 06-12-2005 17:29     Click Here to See the Profile for Louis   Click Here to Email Louis     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
An online collab project with Jan Petter Solheim. Let us know how we did.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/louistwinn_music.htm

If today I find myself,so confused about my life.
Unsure about tomorrow, and which way to go.
And if my heart begins to fear.What it is I cannot see.
Somehow I know that Jesus, will be there for me.

(chorus)
With each step that I take, if I walk by faith.
I'll begin to see, that Jesus, has it all worked out.
And with each step I take, finally I'll see, just where his love, just where it's leading me.

And I will look, until I find, A peace within my mind.
And all my fears soon will disappear, when He is near.
(chorus)
With each step that I take, if I walk by faith.
I'll begin to see, that Jesus, has it all worked out.
And with each step I take, finally I'll see, just where his love, just where it's leading, (repeat chorus)

[This message has been edited by Louis (edited 06-12-2005).]

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Renikay
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From: Vancouver, WA, USA
Registered: May 2005

posted 06-14-2005 13:53     Click Here to See the Profile for Renikay   Click Here to Email Renikay     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
This is a very pretty song, with a good message.

I think maybe your lyrics could stand a little tweaking to say the same thing in a new and different way?? Maybe a little more "story line"???

Good work!

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Reni Kay
www.soundclick.com/renikay

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Louis
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From: Brookwood, alabama
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posted 06-14-2005 16:43     Click Here to See the Profile for Louis   Click Here to Email Louis     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Hmm, I'll give it some thought, thanks Reni

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michael james moore
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From: oceanside,CA,USA
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posted 06-15-2005 22:32     Click Here to See the Profile for michael james moore   Click Here to Email michael james moore     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
wow!A real impact song...strings would be so cool.I love the lyrics and the whole vibe.Great song!!!!!!!1

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Louis
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From: Brookwood, alabama
Registered: Sep 2004

posted 06-16-2005 06:13     Click Here to See the Profile for Louis   Click Here to Email Louis     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Thanks Michael, we had thought about strings, but decided on all acoustic. Hey when I try to play your songs, all I get is a RAM file.

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Jan Petter
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From: HAUGESUND,NORWAY
Registered: Jul 2004

posted 06-23-2005 11:22     Click Here to See the Profile for Jan Petter   Click Here to Email Jan Petter     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
This post said "bump me" so here we go,

BUMP!!!

All the best
Jan Petter

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