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Loved the lyric, the story and the arrangement and the vocal did a nice job carrying the message. My only nit is the fact that I really wanted the third line in the chorus to end with the same rhyming sound as the others. Something like, "We borrow from our neighbors and what we have we share." I think it would have given the final line a little more emphasis but that's entirely a personal thing and takes absolutely nothing from the story which is excellent. I really enjoyed it.
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