Hey Kim,

My thoughts as I read the lyric was that the repeat of the word "December" in the last line of the chorus was a little too much for the short chorus.

I felt like I wanted it to say "It's just another Day to me".....and then like another poster thought, maybe expand the thought slightly. However, as you pointed out, a melody can move a lyric in a direction that you hadn't thought of yet, and so.....LOL.

I liked it tho....just seemed like the meter that I was feeling made my mind read it as I noted. Good luck!


Fred Choate
Billings, Montana

http://www.reverbnation.com/fredchoatemusic