Floyd, You've got a great hook here. And the music works. I'd like to see you sharpen the lyrics. You have some place-holder lyrics that need to be replaced if you want to get the most out of the song ( i.e.: be that as it may / i'd have to say / that i'm up to no good again; you wonder why.. we try to make it work; etc.) But your off to a fast start. I enjoyed listening to it.


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