Amazing piece of work, Mr. Nelson. I love the change in mood from the verses to the chorus which becomes somewhat whimsical musically. My only nit lyric wise is the second line of the first verse.

I can feel the warmth from a firefly;
hear its sweet song on the wind.

What is the sweet song of a firefly as they don't make a sound that we hear? It's a poetic notion I'll grant you but doesn't make sense to me. Probably doesn't matter as it's such grand poetry for a song but it did jump out at me when I read and listened for the second time. But like I said, it's no big thing.

You really painted a collage of moods withing one song musically and I'm glad I got to hear it in it's early form. It stands alone just fine as is but with what you have in mind for it I can't wait to hear it in finalized form. Thanks for sharing it with us, Sir.

Stevie

I'm the only person here who is not unique.