Thank you to everyone who gave such great suggestions and feedback on the original version. There have been some revisions to the Chorus both lyrically and instrumentally. Also, some additional keyboards have been added along with some basic cleanup of the guitar tracks. Is it better? I hope so! LOL! You get so close to something it's hard to tell sometimes. Not sure if it's because I'm listening now on my headsets but the piano on the chorus sounds way too loud. An easy fix but for what ever reason I didn't notice before.

https://soundcloud.com/taylor-j-thomas/when-she-smiles-2104

When She Smiles
Words & Music by Tom Wilson 2014

I like our quite conversations
She speaks without a sound
I love the silent way she moves me
When there's no one else around

Chorus:
When She smiles I'm still taken by surprise
With all I see within her eyes
Maybe I'm crazy just dreaming all the while
But I'm still believing when she smiles

I like the places we get lost in
Most would never understand
I love the easy she finds me
And reminds me every day that I'm her man


Chorus:
When She smiles I'm still taken by surprise
With all I see within her eyes
Maybe I'm crazy just dreaming all the while
But I'm still believing when she smiles

Instrumental

Repeat Chorus

Last edited by Tom W.; 03/03/14 08:51 PM.