Originally Posted by E Swartz
Bugsey,

This reminded me of late 60's/early 70's popular jazz. I haven't heard anything like this for awhile. I think you did a nice job with this! I was a little unsure however perhaps, that this bridge didn't leave this Latin bossa nova vibe slightly. I like bridges to digress, but to stay within the genre unless your song is more abstract--I'm not sure on this comment, just throwing it out for you to analyze.

Lyrically, I like this pretty well, but the one line "you got my heart from the very start," perhaps a little trite--I think you need to stay more "sexy" (especially) with a Latin song.

Very cool unique write here!

steady-eddie.


Thanks Eddie. it's a bossa nova so I suppose however far that goes back, is how old it could sound. I dont think i would record it this way for real, would probably go more on the pop side.

I wanted the lyric to be simple, if the guy s talking to a woman who doesnt speak english....