Hi Vic,

I like this one. A simple story told well. Good melody and chord progression.

As far as production is concerned, I think the vocal is too loud over the intro but is fine once the bass and drums come in. If you have volume automation, you could start lower and bring it up after the intro.

I am not a fan of the distorted guitar tone....too brittle for my ears, although it cuts through the mix once everything else is playing.


Colin

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