Hey Joe,

Wow! You're really on a roll as of late. I think this is my favorite lyric of yours up to this point! I absolutely love it. It's beautiful and very well written. Very touching without being too mushy. Sometimes very hard to do.

After the first read I picked up a melody right off the bat. I liked it so much I sang it a couple of times. There's a few very minor meter bumps that are very easy to sing through, so nothing I would call an issue. A couple of typos, but again no big deal.

I love this lyric. I wish I had more time on my hands. I'd probably be asking to compose it. Very nice! You should really try to get this one put to music. Excellent!

David