Originally Posted by Mark Kaufman
Hey, you wrote a Beatles song! Very nice.

If you're thinking of re-doing it, I would agree that you could probably fret up a bit, if you mean in pitch--I think that would put more energy into the vocal, and maybe even up the tempo a notch or two. It has a vibrant feel to the composition, but a tad relaxed in the delivery, so those changes might give it more zest. And Floyd is right: harmonies! Maybe even some of the counterpoint kind that come in when the lead isn't singing.

Cool stuff!


Thanks for the listen Mark! Yeah i stumbled into that guitar lick and it fit, so I borrowed it! I figured out how to change the chords around and sing it more in my range. And I plan on picking up the pace and adding background vocals as well. May take me a bit to get everything lined up, but its worth the effort. Glad you liked it!

Todd

Everything we have has come from you, and we
give you only what you have already given us!

1 Chronicles 29:14


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