David, I'm glad you're learning humility in Nashville. Here's an opportunity to learn a little more. This thing is really, really close in concept and structure to mine with the exact same title. I know you know who I am and are familiar with my stuff. Here's what you're not learning in Nashville...a lot of your imagery has nothing to do with scent and the 60 year old letter that still smells of perfume is completely unbelievable. Hell, if the perfume was that strong in 52, he should've taken it to MacArthur so they could've dropped it on Pork Chop Hill and wiped out the enemy.

Leave my work out of your writing process.


Nashville demos etc:

https://www.soundclick.com/bands3/default.cfm?bandID=431939

other demos:

https://soundcloud.com/wabash-cannibal

Amazon Kindle books by Robert George you may enjoy:

1) Americana

2) Teenage Graceland

3) The Will to Be

4) Fort Mystery

5) Wheel Sea

6) My One True Love