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Diverge
by Michael W. Brown - 09/13/26 08:38 PM
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Hey Vic!
I listened to this yesterday, and liked it's general feel and melody, but felt something else may be needed to round out the mix a bit. I'm getting a little "Country/Rock with this with a "Springsteen" feel with this beat.
I played the intro a couple of times, for me, I'd count to four twice then crack into this song. The other thing I'd like with these quick phrases, is maybe some end of line "answers" with the lead guitar and possibly some quick drum hits with it--maybe not every time. Something to experiment with--for what it's worth. Loved this chorus, even though it's not an "in your face type," it still feels powerful.
Nice work here, I think you can improve it with some subtle arrangement changes!
steady-eddie.
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