Beth.
Strange how things happen by accident.
In the second chorus I made a mistake by going to the chord of G instead of C and finishing with a Bm7 and it works like a bridge to the instrumental, so I went some way to what you're thinking.

Other than that I do prefer not to explain the meaning of a song too much. Rather leave it up to listener interpretation. Sort of audience participation. (Hey! That Rhymes). Lollylol!

So, what you're suggesting (although makes sense and is well thought out) is not the feeling I want for this song.

It goes without saying though that I will think your suggestion out.
Thank you.
Vic

It's never too late? Yes it is, so do it now.

If, given time, a monkey can write the complete works of Shakespeare maybe there's hope for me.

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