Really nice song, has a little bit of a country sound, which I think is what you were going for, but I also think this has potential for a crossover into the pop genre as well. I also heard a little bit of Hey There Delilah when I listened to it. I'm also going to agree with Mike in that a little break would have been nice in a couple of places.

Overall, nice song, great work!


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