Wes, my lyrical buddy,

I like how you express yourself in lyrics. Still, I have a miniature nit.

Please could you lead the way

For the entire song I got the feeling he was talking to himself. Then I read the above. It made me hesitate. I think you should keep it to himself. But, that's just my opinion.

Reading it I got that Bachman Turner Overdrive feeling. Which is good. Nice job.

Dave smile