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RY X
by Gary E. Andrews - 09/21/26 04:03 PM
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Soft Loft
by Gary E. Andrews - 09/21/26 11:52 AM
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8Graves
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Saosin
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Spiritbox
by Gary E. Andrews - 09/18/26 09:51 PM
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Some good lines especially v1
Once and for all
I make my final fall
Once and for all
The writings on the wall
She's leaving now without the slightest stall
Once and for all
I think this needs a rethink though especially that stall line which reads more of a rhyme for the sake of a rhyme.Too many alls, perhaps break it up with other couplets.
Of course I could be wrong lol
Travis
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