Hi Dave,

I really like the feel to this. The hook melody is lingering in my head right now...a good thing! It would be nice to read the lyric, although I can make out everything; it would just absorb more into my brain on a listen that I’m going to comment on. But I caught “Your memory stays behind”, a cool thought...and “Life was just like peach parfait”...a bright image that jumps out. Mike delivered a gritty, expressive arrangement for you and his attention to detail is front and center. The harmonies are cool as they dig in and hold on! Enjoyed it!

Kristi

A musician must make music, an artist must paint, a poet must write,
if he is to be ultimately at peace with himself. What a man can be,
he must be. -- Abraham Maslow, American Psychologist