Hi Calvin,

I like how the sentimental chord progression in the verses offsets the funny lyric. Your phrasing is fantastic on this. I like this way more than the song "Timothy" (by the guy that did the "Pina Collada Song")--in your song, you direct the cannibalism towards yourself, and that's more..um..palatable, LOL..

Mike


Last edited by Michael Zaneski; 01/04/17 09:06 PM.

Fate doesn't hang on a wrong or right choice
Fortune depends on the tone of your voice

-The Divine Comedy (Neil Hannon)
from the song "Songs of Love"
from the album "Casanova" (1996)