Hi David,

This covers it all. Such a well-thought out lyric and is delivered resolutely. I like how the lines play off of each other to make a point (or two or three)! It’s easy to tap your toes to this and shake your head in agreement or disagreement... wink

And I like the distance covered in the chorus lyric by changing that last line...then the switch from "you" to "we". Subtle, but it's there.

It’s a journey, it’s about the journey, and it’s an enjoyable ride! Very nicely done!

Kristi

A musician must make music, an artist must paint, a poet must write,
if he is to be ultimately at peace with himself. What a man can be,
he must be. -- Abraham Maslow, American Psychologist