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One more comment. This is just me but I'd change "leaked from her eye" to "fell from her eye".
..ant Maybe..... In an earlier version of the lyric, one line indicated they were both trying very hard not to cry. "Leaked" makes sense in that context. I changed the line - but not the leak  I came to like the coupling with "cheek". Thanks, ant Scott
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