I think this song is pure genius, in terms of the set up, story and hook. It reminds me of Don McLean.

Since you say you "won't be going back to it" I will say it is fine the way it is. BUT, if you ever decide to revisit it, feel free to shoot me a PM and I will add in my two cents about some things you COULD do in production if you wanted to, just as ideas and suggestions. But as I say it is great the way it is. Amazing set up.


David Snyder, Composer, Author
Singer-Songwriter, Producer
Regional Chapter Coordinator, NSAI
www.davidsnydermusic.com
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