Cool song. I could hear where this song could work as a jazz standard.

I thought the lyrics were fine. The performance, arrangement, and production are all excellent.

The only thing you might want to consider is to pick up the tempo slightly (~10BPM).

Really well done.

Peace,
TC


If it has strings I will find a way to play it!

You can hear my tunes at https://soundcloud.com/tc-gypsy